Structure a pitch or proposal to be genuinely persuasive
When to use
You're preparing a sales pitch, proposal, or persuasive presentation.
What you'll get
A structured pitch outline with a loss-framed opening, a price anchor strategy, relevant social proof, and a specific low-risk call to action.
The prompt
I'm preparing a pitch or proposal for [WHAT YOU ARE SELLING OR PROPOSING] to [AUDIENCE].
The offer: [DESCRIBE IT]. The price or ask: [AMOUNT OR REQUEST]. What I know about what this audience cares about: [THEIR PRIORITIES OR PAIN POINTS].
A few things the research on persuasion is consistent on:
- People are more motivated by what they stand to lose than by what they stand to gain. Framing the problem first โ what happens if they don't act โ tends to be more compelling than leading with the solution.
- The first number anyone hears sets an anchor that pulls subsequent numbers toward it. What reference point should they encounter before they hear my price?
- Social proof works best when the reference group closely matches the audience. Generic testimonials from different industries move almost nobody.
Structure this pitch to: open with the problem they have and what it's costing them, not the solution I offer; set the right price anchor before I reveal my number; include social proof specifically relevant to this audience; and end with a call to action that makes the next step feel low-risk and concrete.Why this prompt works
The loss-framing opening is the most important structural element. Framing inaction as a cost consistently outperforms framing action as a benefit.
The psychology behind this
First Number Wins
Read the full experiment โ16_anchoring.mdSocial Proof
Read the full experiment โ38_social_proof.mdThe Reciprocity Principle
Read the full experiment โ32_reciprocity.mdLoss Aversion
Read the full experiment โ18_loss_aversion.md